A wolf looking for her mate...
I really like this flash - it has a fun concept. A female wolf finds her mate within a human male~ The end is especially fun, seeing the two together and happily chasing each other. And it's also sweet, as wild wolves tend to mate for life. XD I especially love how the music fits in with the animation so well - and the animation itself is very good. Not the best, yes, but I certainly wouldn't huff at your animating skills!
Gusana, gusana... I've heard your name before, I know that much. Are you on DeviantArt?
oh yeah n_n Thanks for comment!
Not the most terrible thing I've seen
Story wise it also seem a little rushed and quick. As someone said before, it seems like things are just happening. Whether you're going for parody or not, you need to make the story a little more fluid. I wasn't really that into it, but then again, nonstop action isn't really my thing. I have no idea if you're trying to go for an anime parody or not. If you are, then your dialogue is fine. If you aren't, might want to work on that. The art in some places was really good, as well with the animation. Other times... eh, not the best, but nothing that can't be fixed with practice.
Overall, I can see the effort you put into this, and the fact that you're self-taught really means something. because I've been "self-teaching" myself for years and haven't figured a thing out in Flash. Anyways, everything I've critqued, really, are just things that grow with the passage of time. I'm sure as you keep making these, things will get better.
The best one yet
I actually wasn't a huge fan of the first two. The first one made me smile, but I didn't care much for it. When I saw the second one, I watched it. Again, made me smile, but not much else to it. This one, however, made me laugh. I actually wanted to press the replay button, and I did, several times. Much more enjoyable, much funnier, overall. Keep this up and I'll be jumping up and down when episode 4 comes along... not that my sole opinion matters because it really doesn't. XD
Good job guys! ^^
I loved that commercial...
And I loved this too. Maybe one of these days I should actually read Hetalia, though. >.>
... one of my favorite demotivational posters when I say : WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN CANNOT BE UNSEEN.
Extremely lulzy. XD
I was just reminded of my current horror in MS. Some biatch fairy wants me to collect 1000+ cursed dolls in different quest segments... I cried when she mentioned the 1000 one... Well, I wanted to but I didn't actually. Why do I play the game? D:
But other than that horrid reminder, great animation, you kept to the MS style very exactly, and you managed to get a chuckle out of me. Good job. ^^
The other day...
this song was on the radio. I couldn't go ten seconds without laughing because I was reminded of this. If only I wasn't with my parents at the time. D:
ANYWAYS, still love this and I love the style too! ^^ The Easter eggs are extremely lulzy.
But I wasn't too crazy about the animation. That could use work, but I did laugh at this. ^^
This is the reason...
That everytime I go "Haha" I have to end it with "dangly parts". XD
Good job. ^^
PIERCED THE HEAVENS WITH HIS DRILL! It only goes to prove that the Savior is the epitome of all manliness. XD
Seriously. Loved the GL refs and the credits. That made me lol.
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